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Interesting how often want of attention and sex is mistaken for affection.

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:icontyros:
Yeah... I agree. And I really enjoy Haiku. n.n Although... you have one too many syllables in the middle line, I think. *Nods some*

Not too bad, though - Haiku are known for getting things across through sounds, a lot like the Japanese language. Expressive ones are nice, too, though - and much more common in English haiku.

Not bad, amigo. Sorry for the late comment - I'm still catching up from my Brawl hiatus. XD;

- Tyros

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In loving memory of Jean Marie Lampman: Among other things, a wonderful grandmother.
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It's interesting how each line seems to be a different step in a process. The only thing I'd mention is that maybe you'd want to change "thing" to "things". Well, bye.

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I have heard there are troubles of more than one kind. Some come from ahead, and some come from behind. But I've brought a big bat. I'm all ready, you see. Now my troubles are going to have trouble with me.
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You're right, but I'm too lazy to actually do it.

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Since I know longer think of reality as reality,
what reason would I have to think of dreams as dreams?
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